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 Post subject: Tales of Shadow (1)
PostPosted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 3:08 pm 

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I have been writting in game books about this story for a bit now
On a previouse shard they copied my book, and planed to distribute to players, but that shard got cloed down, so i tried to do the same on obs, but they mighten duplicate books
So i will write the storys in the forM
The story loosely follows Shadow hunter (making fun of him) and everyone in the sahrd will be incorperated somehow
NOW with that being said onto the sory
(also ignore all gramatical errors)

"Gaahh!" A young man screams out in pain, fearfully looking at his attack. His attack has him pinned up against a tree, repeatedly ramming him over and over with his long, develish horns. His ivory feet flicking dirt behind him as he charges towards the young man, slamming him into the tree over and over.
The young man is screaming in agony, spittle flying from his mouth everytime this monster slams into his chest. The young man reachs for his belt pouch, pulling out a small skinny dagger. he flips it around in his hand, so the blade is pointing downwards. The monster slowly steps back, sizes up the young man, flicks his devilish foot, and once more charges at him. The young man times his strike, and at the last minute he thrusts the blade downwards at the monster.
"Baaaahhh!" The monster screams out an echoing cry of pain, the dagger has just skimmed its ribs, the Goat takes of running in the opposite direction in the forest.
The young man looks down in his hands, noticing the dagger is missing. He feels an amazing amount of pain in his right leg, he looks down, to see his dagger jammed in his leg. He accidently stabbed himself during the attack.
"HELP!" Screams the young man, in the forest located jus tout of cove. "SOMEONE HELP ME!" The young man continues to scream. He sees a distant figure merge out of the woods. It is a man. He is running towards him, with terror in his face. He recognizes him as his friend Ch'uan Fa.
"Whats the matter Shadow?" Ch'uan Fa is knelt beside Shadow, examining hs body. "Who done this to you?! I will kill them!" Ch'uan Fa stands up, unsheaths his flimsy kryss, and starts to spasmatically throw it into the air, in what is suppose to be a threatning matter.
"Do not worry friend, I am safe now. I made the attacker withdraw into the woods, tend to me wounds, take me to town, and i will tell you of the tale!" Shadow starts to lean back, hands behind his head, enjoying being tended on. Ch'uan fa leans down, and drives the dagger out of Shadow's thigh. "AAAAHHHHHH!!!!" Shadow screams, and passes out in pain. When he awakes he is sitting on a bench outside of Vesper bank. Ch'uan Fa and Dark Rider are Tentivly staring at Shadow.
"I told him yu rided away a PK'er, he laughed and said your lieing, go on, tell him its true!" Ch'uan Fa demands Shadow.
"Weeell......"




End of Part 1
ill make a part 2 if any one enjoyed this and wants to see more

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 Post subject: Re: Tales of Shadow (1)
PostPosted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 7:30 pm 

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lol cant wait to read the sequel.

BTW who's Ch'uan Fa?

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 Post subject: Re: Tales of Shadow (1)
PostPosted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 8:44 pm 

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Ch'uan Fa is my current in game character

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:45 pm 

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well might as well keep on going until you cant think of shizz to write lol,
ill read

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:23 am 

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I enjoyed it :) Keep going!


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 Post subject: Re: Tales of Shadow (1)
PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 4:09 am 

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It's "attacker" as in "he looked at his attacker". You should really proofread your material bro. Other than that, it's pretty good.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:33 pm 

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if you where immature enough to think a horn was a penis, and that the goat was attacking him meant sex, then you have a sad life ahead of you.

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:05 pm 

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Ashes, if you passed high school, you would have read that Shadow Hunter was being rammer (lol)
So i dont understand what your going on about, is it your fantasy to have me rammed repeatedly?

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:06 pm 

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I wouldnt mind a hug thanks :)
And I am not getting upset, i was just explaining.

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:15 pm 

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What does ITT mean?
And if i was upset, id be cursing, or just saying im upset. You did use to piss me off, but now your just like raptor to me, i look forward to reading your stupid posts and seeing you humiliate yourself over and over again. We always need a raptor, thanks ashes :D

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:30 pm 

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Aww... ITT means in this thread

ITT: Ashes shows his true love for me <3

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